Thursday, May 15, 2008

Director's cut - Tidal

/ an ominous ocean wave / the instant it breaks on the shore / solemn, fierce powers are at work / as if the stone rivaled with water / water will win / but only after countless years / too many to bear meaning /

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2 comments:

  1. drinking green tea
    pretending it's seaweed...

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  2. I love how you were able to incorporate my work into your own and still not alter the meaning. Very cool!

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